PRISMS OF FATE
fading brightness
from mountains of glory
to canyons of fate
golden shades melting
turning into brown
the stars have dimmed
in the sky once bright
shine your rainbow prism
through the rift of clouds
where my feet will follow
and my heart will hold
visions of the dark night
this never-ending rain
full of sorrow and pain
where my hands bleed
against my aching heart
©AvdL 2011
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January 12, 2011 at 4:23 pm
Hartseer.
xxx
January 13, 2011 at 11:18 am
Hugs my friend oxox
January 12, 2011 at 5:51 pm
My heart goes out to all those affected by the world-wide weather phenomena.
January 13, 2011 at 11:19 am
Thanks so much Adee…hugs xoxo
January 12, 2011 at 5:54 pm
This is so reminiscent of the floods, Amanda… sad and tight!
And yet, the immense beauty in this poem is just like that of mother nature… gentle, and yet bold!
Very beautiful, my dear…
And OH YEA, it is soooo good to have you back!!!
January 13, 2011 at 11:20 am
Thanks Kavz..the true devastation comes to light more and more every day. We will overcome this ….together. Thanks my friend oxoxoxox
January 13, 2011 at 5:22 pm
Such lovely bittersweet words. Really one of my favorites you’ve written. The devastation comes to light to us through your words. Take care.
January 12, 2011 at 6:54 pm
the tv coverage is scary and awesome at the same time – like when we have fires here xox
January 13, 2011 at 11:21 am
Have you heard from your friends yet Tandy? oxo
January 13, 2011 at 4:01 pm
not yet!
January 12, 2011 at 9:39 pm
A beautiful elegy to what has been lost. Keep your heart safe, my friend.
January 13, 2011 at 11:21 am
Thanks Ms M….Hugs xoxo
January 12, 2011 at 10:47 pm
Beautiful imagery, I could think of the setting sun throwing it’s golden light on mountains, slowly fading into twilight, and then the black of the night. You really have a way with bringing out emotions using such vivid imagery. Always a delight to read your poetry. Wonderful poem!
January 13, 2011 at 11:22 am
Thanks DP…you always say such nice thing…Hugs oxo
January 13, 2011 at 12:21 am
Nice. Great photo.
January 13, 2011 at 11:23 am
Thanks for the visit my friend, much appreciated oxo
January 13, 2011 at 1:38 am
A beautiful poem about such deep sadness and pain for so many….stay safe my friend.
January 13, 2011 at 11:23 am
*Heart* oxo
January 13, 2011 at 2:33 am
Very deep and sad. Hope you are safe, I have some friends in Australia who have been sending pictures it looks quite terrible. Hope you are safe.
January 13, 2011 at 11:24 am
Thanks Mark, I am safe….and I appreciate your thoughts so much my friend oxo
January 13, 2011 at 3:17 am
Song is so good and felt releived to see your post.
Let us hope the damage of floods is minimum.
January 13, 2011 at 11:25 am
Thank you so much, I appreciate your presence here oxo
January 13, 2011 at 4:09 am
This one started out colorfully but ended in anguish – quite a turn-around, emphasized by the difference. Makes my hug reflex tingle. Strong stuff, Buttercup!
January 13, 2011 at 11:25 am
Oh Eric, thanks so much my dear friend oxo
January 13, 2011 at 4:31 am
Words I know came right from your heart, Amanda. I pray that the rainbow will soon arc over Australia bringing hope and healing to your land. Blessings coming now for you and all your people…
January 13, 2011 at 11:26 am
I know your words come from your heart too Carol…. and I thank you. Love from your friend in Oz oxoxox
January 15, 2011 at 2:32 am
Ha! I bet you feel like you have been tossed inside the winds of a hurricane and dropped into the Land of Oz! May you soon be able to click your shiny red shoes together and wish yourself back to beautiful Australia. It will happen.
January 13, 2011 at 7:56 am
Sad, heartfelt–hope your family and friends are safe.
January 13, 2011 at 11:27 am
I thank you so much Heather, it means so much. Hugs xoxo
January 13, 2011 at 8:58 am
I’ve been thinking of you and praying for everyone over there…we’re having bushfires over here in WA. Keep safe. Heart and soul, my friend xx
January 13, 2011 at 11:28 am
You keep safe too my friend….you’re in my thoughts. I’m sending you loads of love always oxoxox
January 13, 2011 at 9:49 am
Awww….there you are – still full of verse and beauty. Thanks, Amanda, and I pray that the horror is receding!
January 13, 2011 at 11:30 am
Thanks so much my friend, I am slowly making my way back….I appreciate your thoughts so much. Big hugs to you always oxo
January 13, 2011 at 11:37 am
Beautifully done.
January 14, 2011 at 4:47 am
Exquisite writing and song…the final two lines slice so deep.
January 15, 2011 at 1:21 am
Terrific. Gorgeous poem and gorgeous pic.
January 16, 2011 at 10:47 pm
WOW………. Girlfriend your poem and song has just expressed what has been going on the past few weeks. It has been devastating these FLOODS but it is amazing how everyone comes together to lend one another a hand in these tough times. It is so great to have you back on your BLOG! You inspire so many people Luv you lots my friend xxoo